I, JURY

It was interesting to see different interpretations of the topic that I had found an brainstormed on as well as of the topic that I did my essay on.  Reading Micaela Hellman's essay, I realized that I forgot to include direct examples from the text in the form of quotes.  I definitely need to work on that for the next essay.  In addition, I read Jake Hoffman's essay where I discovered that he had a similar take on one of the reasons why Huxley may have written the book, which I wrote about in my conclusion paragraph.  Lastly, I also enjoyed reading Colter's interpretation that Bernard was a light in the darkness of the society created by Huxley in Brave New World.  Overall, I noticed that the people whose essays I read had very distinct styles of writing.  Of course, there are always a couple of grammar mistakes and awkward sentences, but for the most part, the examples and supporting facts as well as the thesis were very clearly incorporated and explicated.